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[Amulai Sweet Factory (Kouji)] Juunishin Tiger Red ~Otosare Yuganda Seigi no Yukukata~ | Zodiac Beast Ranger Tiger Red ~A Path of Justice, Warped and Corrupted~ [English] {darknight} [Digital]

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Posted on 12 October 2018, 13:52 UTC by:   darknight    PM
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translated and edited by: darknight
Posted on 12 October 2018, 14:31 UTC by:   Thacker    PM
Score +161
There's a slight mistake. You accidentally repeated the 24th image (023.png) as #11 (010.png), instead of having the correct immediately post-brainwash machine image. I was looking foward to seeing how you were going to deal with the "brainwashed to speak in feminine language, including feminine first person pronouns" issue in translating that image.

Nice choice to go with "Lago" (from lagomorph and the Greek name for the order) for when Pink is turned into a rabbit, instead of the "Rabi/Labi" of the original. Goes well with "Felis."

The name of the sentai team is also kind of tricky to translate, because it's kind of like the 十二神 but with beast (獣) substituted for the same pronunciation. It's kind of difficult because the 十二神王/十二神将 have original in Hindu yaksha kind of absorbed into some Buddhist sects, and then later identified with the Chinese zodiac (十二支, not to be confused with 二十八宿, the constellations, which are more closely associated with the Western Zodiac). (But tiger / Mihira / Mekira isn't supposed to be associated with the color red in any of these systems.) So Beast Zodiac is as fine as anything, it just seems a little odd when they're then fighting a evil organization named (in katakana) Zodiac. (It almost to me has a sense of Eastern Zodiac versus Western Zodiac with the kanji vs katakana.)

Alcor is clearly right for the head bad guy; he's named after the star.

I was wondering what to call the female general (Shuva) you called Seva. I have to think "it's in katakana. Is this a western star or constellation name; it could be short for シュヴァリエ / chevalier / knight? A Sanskrit term for something, perhaps one of the constellations (it's シュヴァ not シヴァ so it shouldn't be Shiva, but on the other hand シュヴァ is used for the Parameshwara, Maheśvara, Isvara, names/aspects for Shiva)? Or is it a Chinese or Japanese term?"

Anyway, good translation, thanks!
Posted on 12 October 2018, 14:46 UTC by:   Larequirem    PM
Score +288
tfw your evil genderbendering crotch tattoo imbuing magic so stronk you make 2 pages full color instantly

RAW:https://e-hentai.bypassed.wtf/g/1293738/6ba4adfc7a/
Posted on 12 October 2018, 15:19 UTC by:   Koroton    PM
Score +39
Thacker is right about the page error. Other than that, solid translation.
Posted on 12 October 2018, 17:01 UTC by:   neh1234    PM
Score +135
Artist skipped Pink's corruption... Feels bad.
Posted on 12 October 2018, 17:22 UTC by:   bigbear0    PM
Score +27
i love crotch tattoo
Posted on 12 October 2018, 17:51 UTC by:   allenwalker39    PM
Score +26
Sweet, my day just got way better.
Posted on 12 October 2018, 18:18 UTC by:   The Goat is Watching    PM
Score +23
Ooh, I haven't seen an interesting Kouji GB work since that Vampire story I helped with last year.

But I have to say, a lot of the text bubbles are a little over-worded. You could simplify the text all over the place and it would read better that way.
Last edited on 12 October 2018, 18:55 UTC.
Posted on 12 October 2018, 21:20 UTC by:   Ouroboros186    PM
Score +0
Lots of amulai recently. Awesome!
Posted on 12 October 2018, 21:58 UTC by:   darknight    PM
Score +79
@Thacker
Whoops, must've clicked on 010.png while saving. Thanks.

I deal with feminine language by introducing the "elder sister" thing early and have red unable to call herself a man at all.

I decided against Cheval or something similar for シュヴァ because Cheval means "horse", and she's clearly got a bird motif going. In the end I decided given Felis, Alcor and the Zodiac, everyone should use some form of a Latin naming convention. Thus we have Lago (short for rabbit / Lagomorph) and Seva (Bird / Aves backwards)
Posted on 12 October 2018, 23:22 UTC by:   Toshikko    PM
Score +15
Haven't seen someone so handsome like Alcor for a long time
Posted on 13 October 2018, 02:14 UTC by:   Sylvrwolflol    PM
Score +86
Y’all mothafuckas are talking advanced linguistics shit...

meanwhile I’m just ogling the hot catgirl because I’m just a monolingual pleb.
Posted on 13 October 2018, 02:17 UTC by:   Starwind08    PM
Score +50
Wanted all of them to be corrupted and turned into girls, but this is fine too.
11/10. Love reading this guy's works.
Posted on 13 October 2018, 06:58 UTC by:   xTtotal    PM
Score +6
@Thacker

personally I am not really a fan of the name change, while felis is understandable (also due to feline being an english word for cat-like) not everyone has greek in school.
Posted on 13 October 2018, 14:41 UTC by:   Thacker    PM
Score +13
@darknight:
Thanks for answering and the insight into your translation choices!
Posted on 13 October 2018, 14:46 UTC by:   RustySword7    PM
Score +23
I like how the plot starts out with that genuine, saturday morning cartoon feel. Sure it gets dark and thrown out of whack later, but it's a pretty accurate parody of sentai.
Last edited on 14 October 2018, 12:59 UTC.
Posted on 15 October 2018, 00:51 UTC by:   theshowmustgoon    PM
Score +35
it would have been nice if
1. felis' ears were a little more fuzzy and didn't just look super mechanical
2. there was a corruption/sex scene with Lago and the cute, fluffy pom-pops on her hair

other than that, this is an amazing doujin and a very good translation - you obviously put a lot of thought and effort into it, which is greatly appreciated
Posted on 15 October 2018, 02:07 UTC by:   imercenary    PM
Score +9
Its like an entire chapter was skipped by the creator.
Posted on 15 October 2018, 02:52 UTC by:   tcaz2    PM
Score +37
This is one of those "Incredibly good but FAR too short" things.

Thanks for the translation.

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